It had taken all I had to keep running. I hadn’t dared look back. The fear, if I had of done so, would have stopped me from running, and I had to run.
Spotting the cave, I made straight for it then crawled in, my breathing heavy, my heart pounding. I glanced left to right to make sure I was not an unwelcome guest in some creatures home.
I pulled my knees up to my chest and stared out towards the light but the sounds I had dreaded echoed towards me in the tiny space. The crunch of the gravel, the heavy breathing, and then the monstrous roar.
I shivered as darkness filled the cave, the creature was covering the entrance. I buried my face into my knees and tried not to whimper, tried not to breathe. Instead, I focussed on counting. 1..2..3..4..5..
Although my eyelids were closed I felt the light reappear in the cave. I dared not to look, I wasn’t ready, I continued to count.
I reached fifty and heard the sounds of retreat. Could that be possible? Unsure I crawled on my hands and knees towards the light.
Seeing the creature’s shadow move down the hillside I knew I was lucky. I didn’t know why but the gods had let me go free.

Cave Photo Courtesy of Sue Vincent
Originally written in response to Sue Vincent’s #Writephoto challenge using the above inspiring image. 🙂
Incredible. How do you write such amazing blogs?
Wow – what a lovely comment thank you very much bug! 🙂 KL ❤
I love the way you describe every moment and expression. Great write-up.
Thank you very much Norain. What a wonderful compliment to receive :). KL ❤
Great story, KL, and a lovely response 🙂
Thanks Sue! 🙂
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Is this based upon a real experience?
amazing piece KC, brilliant writeup.
A heart-stopping moment so aptly described.
Thank you very much Macjam :). KL ❤